Mozzelle

Jordan - that sounds like an excellent idea! if you can get that list (and soon i.e. today), i think it would be very valuable.

Eddy - awesome work. i haven't yet read the script revision, but i think putting the biggest script question into writing was a brave, soldieresque, yet uniquely eddy, move. i think you make the best case for option a: having jeremy change his mind. i'm wondering if there is a fourth option, by which we intermix option a and c. what i mean is that there might be a way to not have the story hinge on this question. i would agree that option b trivializes their miscommunication, and lends jeremy too much benevolence. what we have been trying to say throughout this is not that one brother was right all along, but that they have both been unwilling to listen to, and understand each other. the fourth option i suggest would see jeremy making the decision to include martin (even though it isn't a huge sacrifice) and martin interpreting it, for the first time, as a true act of kindness. the ambiguity comes in - i think we should make the point as subtle as possible. there are definitely cinematic ways we can explore this.